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COLLAB: Spring

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This collaboration was arranged before the other artist deleted her gallery.

Lineart by :iconfaro-re:
Color by me.


I couldn't finish this till now. Faro and I were about to make a collaboration; she would give color to a lineart of mine and I'd do the same with a lineart of hers. I got the pic and here is the result.
Faro happens to use a very achademic-traditional like style, her works seemed to be enterely done with pencils, pastels or charkcola. And it's noticiable in her lineart. Therefore I had to adjust my own style to that, and here is the result.
I don't know what would be happening between Zel and Ame for such dancing scenne, thus I imagined it could be they both were dancing in some private garden at the Seyruun's palace. So this is the result.
I think this finished pic is ok and looks fine enough, but for some reason, I feel uneasy.

*Note: Faro-re isn't active here anymore, and since I have no news from her, I just finished my part of the arrange.

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(Esta colaboración fue acordada antes que la otra autora decidiera borrar su galería)

Línea por :iconfaro-re:
Color hecho por mí.


Al final he podido acabar con este dibujo. Faro y yo íbamos a haber hecho una colaboración, yo con un dibujo suyo y ella con uno mío. Conseguí su dibujo de línea y éste es el resultado.
Faro tiene un estilo muy académico y tradicional a la hora de dibujar, sus trabajos son de carboncillo, lá;piz, pastel, etc... y eso se puede apreciar en su línea. Es por eso que tenía que adaptar el coloreado a su estilo para que quedara bien, y así es como quedó.
No sé qué idea tenía ella en mente al dibujar esta escena, así que se me ocurrió que podría ser un momento privado entre ellos dos, en alguna parte de los jardines reales de Seyruun.
Creo que el resultado es correcto y queda bien, pero por alguna razón, no termina de convencerme.

*Nota: Faro ya no está en activo, pero me he limitado a cumplir con mi parte del trato.
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star-empty: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

First, I would like to say a little something about the lineart. It's too bad ~Faro-Re is no longer active on DA. All her Z/A works were lovely. Zel's figure here seems a bit too thin. If he was a little more bulky, it would look even better. Everything else looks in proportion and even. The fluttering of the cape produces an enchanting floating effect. It really brings out the mood of the dance. It's interesting that amelia's tunic looks like a real dress. I also like the way the ward dangles on her leg. Childish but also very endearing.

Next, the coloring is nicely detailed and smooth. I really like the way you bring out the texture. The darker shades also enhances the curves at the right places.

Last, the background is very detailed but, in my opinion, the grass can be brighter. By doing so, you can also enhance the contrast between the shadow and the grass. However, using different colors of grass is a nice touch. It makes the piece more vibrant. If you used a stock picture for the bushes and trees in the background, it might look better to remove some of the darker flecks that cover the grass. Nice touch adding the wall and tower at the far back.

Overall the image still looks very stunning. I wouldn't be surprised if some of the fans get inspired.